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CE: steampunk thiefshipping by Kamaloba CE: steampunk thiefshipping by Kamaloba
My entry for the steampunk contest at #Thiefshipping-Fans
Couple of textures where used for the table (digitalcraftsman.com/textureBin/pages/COPPER.htm) and the..."handrail(?)"(by ~Moon-WillowStock) but everythin else was me, includin the corny lines as far as I know.
This is crapy so I know I wont win but it was fun to try(and use as an excuse for things*bricked*) full and texture versions my art tumblr
please do comment, itll be much appretiated
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AngelLust155 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mkay critique on the way!! 8D Just like ya wanted!!

I will say the folding on the clothing actually looks pretty nice. Only thing I would say though is to make the shading slightly darker in some ways. Really define the deep folds.
The shine and details on the metal looks rather nice too, and sorta the same, maybe add more light to certain areas as well as darker in some too. And if any type of colours are reflecting off of it such as Marik's glove, add a bit of that colour to it to really make it seem like it shines.
Sooo probably the biggest thing I should say could be improved is more depth in the shading. But in most cases it would also depend simply on how strong the light source is and where it's placed.
Probably the only anatomy error I can really spot is Marik's right arm. Although I wouldn't say it's a huge mistake but it looks a little iffy to me. But other than that I'm not seeing any big mistakes in terms of anatomy. Actually looks pretty decent to me. Or, ya know, as decent as anime anatomy can be XD. It doesn't look deformed is what I mean!

Hope that helps and hopefully my critique didn't upset you!! :iconimsorryplz:
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Kiki-the-cat-demon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i enjoy that his bunny ears are exhaust pipes and marik's creepiness it should be a movie
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mariks creepiness or the whole thing? Cause if its just the creepiness we could make it like that movie with the obsessed fan who kidnaps the guy an-*bricked*
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Kiki-the-cat-demon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the whole thing! reminds me of a movie
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
All I can think with Steampunk is Wild Wild West (which I need to see again)*bricked*
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Kiki-the-cat-demon Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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mywiilz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love the steam coming from Bakura's hair. lovely drawing.
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you~>w<
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ProbablyImpossible Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee: I love Marik in the goggles! The thought of him sitting in his tomb, sulking and working on a robot-Bakura, C3PO-style, just makes me so happy inside. :love:
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
di- did you just make Marik Anakin?>A> Dude, ya realize Im gonna wanna draw that later, right?3 and Im gonna hold ya completely responsible for whatever happens-3-
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ProbablyImpossible Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YES! Hold me responsible! That is a GREAT idea! :XD:
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
fine then, maybe I willXD;
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ProbablyImpossible Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You totaly should. :XD: (This piece is amazingly drawn, by the way. :love:)
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Awesome!
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you^^
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YaoiYuriTwins Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well that's incredibly awesome oAo the backgrounds so pretty owo
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Kamaloba Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~
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YaoiYuriTwins Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^^
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